Hey Guys I have a Story that I've been working on and off that I'm about 10,000 words through. I would like someone to read through and give me a critique. I could finish the story in about 2,000 more words but could also stretch in another 10,000 depending on the recommendation. If you are interested just message me privately and I'll email it. I don't want to publish it publicly until its done. The story contains pregnancy, sci-fi, breast and ass growth, and penis expansion.