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Unfortunate Events
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Billybob69
Hey guys. This is the first story I've written so don't be too harsh. There are lots of gramatical and spelling errors so I'll try to come back through and edit mistakes! ThanksBig Grin
-------------------Unfortunate Events---------------
Katie was an average teenage girl living on an exotic animal farm. She was 18 and the only unaverage part about her was her looks. She had brown hair, blue eyes, big lips, and a very womanized face. She was 5'9, small ass, and very small C cups as breasts.

Her father bred exotic animals such as minotaurs and fawns(half goat half human, makes great milk) etc. Minotaurs are bred with the cows to produce high quality milk from their developed offspring. He makes a killing off of the dairy products. He is out of town for a week. Katie's mom died awhile back when katie was 9 years old.

Katie, senior, wasnt very popular at school, nor is she considered "hot". Not that it mattered, considering she needed to focus more on school. She has a hard time focusing due to her ADHD, but her medicine gets her by. The only two things she cared about was school and this one classmate of hers. Shes always had a crush on him since the day they became friends freshman year. In class her and john talk everyday.
"You realize there's a football game Friday right?" John said.
"Yeah but its supposed to rain and I had plans anyways." She lied.
She wasnt the kind of person to be very social let alone go to crowded football games.

"Oh really? I think you are just trying to get out of it." He saw right through her. "Okay i get it. Not the place you like to be. Heres a better plan. Want to hang out? Like just me and you?" Her eyes lit up as she jumped for joy inside.
"I mean i guess i could squeeze you in my schedule," She teased.
They both laughed and grinned at each other.

When katie got home, she couldnt help but notice the semi trucks unloading boxes to the storage barn. She decided to investigate. What were these boxes for? She asked one of the men unloading what the boxes are for, which in his reply he said, " they're pills to increase fertility in the cattle, speeds up pregnancy, and increases their basic animal behavior." As katie bent over to look through the boxes she dropped her ADHD pill capsule in the box of other pill capsules. She quickly reached in and retrieved it from the box.

Later that evening she took her daily dose of pills before she ate her dinner. Afterwards she went to sit outside to think. Her cat was an outside cat always moving and such. She noticed it run into the livestock barn.
"Ughh not again skittles." She said as she got up to chase the cat into the barn. As katie walked in she saw skittles climbed up on a support beam over the minotaur pen. Grabbing a ladder she noticed something different. The minotaurs sounded restless and even wild. They usually only do this when they are breeding. Weird, she thought to herself. She put the ladder against the pen to grab skittles and as she climbed up the minotaur shook the pen. The ladder colapsed! Katie fell on the ground. She shook her head and realized she was on the otherside of the pen. "Oh god!" She exclaimed. The ground started to shake as she turned her head around. The minotaur was coming right for her! As the beast grabbed her she could see it drooling and could smell its stinking breath. The most noticable part was his giant dick.
Is he going to fuck me? She thought. No thats impossible, they only go for cattle that are in heat. Before she could even finish her thought it ripped her clothes off and rammed his dick deep inside her. Katie shrieked in horror as He fucked her hard doggie style. The thing wouldnt let her go of his grips. Finally it finished and she could feel it slightly expand her stomache. She passed out before she could even escape.

Katie woke up the next morning confused. Was that a nightmare? She looked around. Still inside the pen. No it wasnt. She just wanted to forget this ever happened. As she finished taking a shower she noticed something. Her boobs were bigger and she couldnt fit in e sized bra. Her ass was bigger too. She also developed a small but noticable gut. It was rounder and had a slightly more curvier look to it. The biggest thing she noticed was 2 small bumps on her head and a slightly bigger one just above the midsection of her ass. She thought about it quietly as she went to school.
"Are you okay katie?" John asked her as he noticed his curvier friend, who seemed to be anxious about something.
"I don't know i woke up, and i guess something just didn't seem right. I really dont want to talk about it."
She noticed him staring at her ass and she blushed a little. Maybe this is a good thing? John likes curvy. All of a sudden katie felt nautious and ran to the bathroom to puke. She thought it must've been something she ate.

When she got home from school she decided to go get new bras considering they just grew bigger. She barely squeezed into d cups so she went to h cups. She decided to get lace hongs to make her ass more comfortable.

As katie got home she felt exhausted and somewhat horny? She noticed her nipples harden and her panties wet. For some reason she kept thinking about last night and it made her hornier. She shook her head trying to get rid of that thought. It was time for bed so she ate her dinner took her pills and went to bed.

The next morning became weirder. When katie looked in the mirror she noticed black spots on her leg and her feet were smaller. Her bumps on her head turned into small horns that werent noticeable, but they were there! The bump on her lower back grew into a 2 inch tail with fur at the end. She could even wiggle it a little! Her ears were becoming narrower, pointier and slightly longer. Her ass was bigger plumpier, her boobs were squeezing out of her h sized bras, and last but not least her belly grew bigger. It felt firm and tight. It looked as if she was 6 months pregnant with twins. She began to freakout. Skipping school was not an option, so she threw on a tight tank top that was too small for her own good. Katie would either pull it down and show a lot of cleavage or pull it up and show a lot of her lower belly. She didn't care though. Katie pulled her thong up and threw on some tight yoga pants, which were stretched to their limits considering how big and round her ass has gotten. Going to school she avoided john the best she could, but she failed to avoid the looks and whispers she would get from other people.

Katie was quickly walking to her car after she heard that bell ring. She was so close to getting home. There! The car was in sight, only 50 yards away. She walked slightly faster when she heard "Katie!" From a familiar voice. She kept walking, acting like she didn't hear it. She put her hand on the door handle and opened it. Halfway to opening it another hand quickly shut it.
"Katie, why are you avoiding me and are the rumors about you tr-" katie slowly turned around and john went wide eyed. He stared at her boobs first then to her stomache. Katie noticed a bulge in johns jeans, and for some reason it turned her on. She wanted to ride him. What is going on with me? She thought.
"I dont know what's going on with me john, but i don't want to talk about it."
"I..." Is all he managed to say as she stepped in her car and zoomed off.
She rubbed between her legs and moaned thinking about john. Her nipples became hard again. This is getting to weird. I need to go to the doctor, she thought.

"You're pregnant." The doctor said bluntly.
"How? I haven't had sex yet?" Katie replied not even thinking about the minotaur.
"Well ma'am i dont know what to tell you other then the fact that the babies are healthy and you are healthy." The babies?!
"Im having twins?!" She exclaimed.
"Triplets. Big triplets. Never seen babies this big to be honest, considering you are only 3 months along." 3 months?! It's been barely 2 days!
He couldn't explain the other weird happenings and didn't even bother to look more into it. Katie was screwed and on her own. Triplets? She thought. I can't do this. Im not ready to be a mother. As she was driving home she felt multiple kicks. She placed her hand on her belly and rubbed it very slowl, going over her innie and reaching around the other side, while driving with her other hand. She moaned softly. She was getting horny way more than she ever has been. In fact she has never been the girl to get horny at all. This was very strange to her.

What was happening to her? She growned as she took her last pill. Just before she threw away the capsule katie noticed something. These weren't her pills! They were the ones that were given to the cattle. There was a warning label that read: Do not take if human. Side effects include permanent animal changes, higher fertility, and behavior changes. No antidote for this pill and most likely wont be. Use one per cattle.

"Great." Katie muttered under her breath. It all came together. She was able to be impregnated by the minotaur, because of these pills. It turns her into a half cow half human or hucow. Walking to the barn to test the minotaurs behavior in response to her seemed like a good idea.

As she opened the barn door, she got a quick wiff of the air. It smelled of sweat, heat, and sex, which was weird, because before, to her, it smelled like shit and smelly animals. She was immediately turned on by this. Katie's little tail involuntarily started wagging. The minotaurs immediately started snarling and ramming into the pen. There was fire in their eyes as they knew Katie was in heat. She watched as sweat dripped down her neck onto and between her boobs, and continued to run down her swollen belly. Katie noticed her mouth was slightly hanging open with her tongue hanging out, drooling. The minotaur's cock was almost appetizing to her, and she couldn't take her eyes off of it. She rubbed her sweaty belly from the top all the way around then down to her clit. She moaned softly. Katie, what the hell are you doing?! Snap out of it! She told herself. Her animal instincts were beginning to show and katie was losing control. She ran inside and decided today was enough.

The next morning katie awoke hoping it was a dream. Closing her eyes before looking in the mirror made her feel better, but what she was about to see would make everything worse. She opened her eyes in shock. Herboobs grew to the point where they couldn't fit in h cups anymore. She would have to wear DD cups. The bumps on her head turned in to short horns. And her ears weren't her ears anymore. They were cow ears. Her tail was now 3 feet long and waiving slowly, involuntarily behind her back. Her ass was even bigger and rounder. Katie's hips even grew slightly wider too, thighs thicker. The worst part was her feet, except they werent feet anymore. They were hooves! Like a cow hoove. She knew it was harder to walk. Katie's legs had brown spots all along her legs up to just below her ass. Finally her belly wasn't 6 months along. It looked like 9 months along with human baby triplets! It was shiny gleeming from her bathroom light(She must've been sweating when she slept.). Her belly button was no longer an innie. It was a large 1 inch outtie and very firm. She was touching herself everywhere to see if this was all real. Katie couldn't believe how sensitive she was. A single touch of her boobs, ass, vagina, or even belly turned her on!

Katie knew she couln't go to school until she was back to normal, so she took her friday off to go shopping for bigger clothes. Everywhere she walked it was a struggle to carry the load in her belly so she waddled and struggled to walk with her new hooves everywhere using a hand to support her back and the other resting on her stomach. She was covering herself with a hat and trench coat, which minimized stares, but her belly was just too much to hide, and people noticed. She got larger shirts that still wouldnt cover half her belly. She bought booty shorts and yoga pants to feel more comfortable considering how much she sweats now, and finally she got DD sized cups that still could barely hold her boobs in. Katie just wanted to get home and take a nap. When she got home she slipped out of her clothes except her thong and bra. She paced around rubbing her huge belly moaning quietly. Maybe lotion would make it better? She thought. Katie grabbed some lotion from the bathroom and sat down on the couch. She had to spread her legs to make herself comfortable. As katie spread the lotion on her belly she rubbed it very slowly. She couldnt reach her hand all the way across so she had to use both hands to rub lotion on every inch of surface on the massive belly. Katie ran her fingers over her belly button repeatedly. The thong she had on was soaking from her clit and her tail slowly moved back and forth. Eventually she fell asleep.

Ding dong! What? Who could be here? She thought. She checked her phone reading 2 missed calls from john and a text saying "katie?! Are you okay? You didnt go to school today and you didnt answer my phone call, which you never do! Im coming over to check up on you!

Katie panicked and threw on a robe. She waddled to the door as fast as she could to open it seeing john with a worried look on his face. "Katie what's going on? You are making me worried! I wish you would tell me what the hell is happening."
"Come inside and ill explain everything." They walked inside and sat down next to each other on the couch.
"I'm turning into a hucow, which is a half human half cow. It's from taking the pills for my dad's cattle, which increases animal activity, function, and fertility. The worst part is...i was raped by a minotaur in the barn thinking i was a cow in heat. I'm pregnant with hucow triplets, and its progressing fast."
"I....dont know what to say." John was speechless. He didn't want katie to figure out he had a huge pregnancy fetish.
"There isn't anything TO say. There's no antidote and i'm pretty sure the transformation is finished, but this belly might get bigger." She replied.
"C-Can i see it?" He said shyly.
Katie was surprised by this question. Of all things he could've said, he wants to see this monsterous mound? She shrugged. "I mean, I guess." She pulled her robe halfway down her arms to reveal her bra and massive bare load.
He stared for the longest time, and grew the largest erection he's ever had. Katie noticed the very noticable bulge in his jeans even sitting down. She stared back licking her lips. Her babies all started kicking at once. "Oh!" She shot her hands to her stomach. "They're kicking!" She almost forgot her crisis situation, and remembered, but she didn't care. John was turning her on, and she could smell a fragerance in the air that turned her on. Was it the hucow instincts making her this way?
"C-Can i feel?" He choked. He had to tell her about his secret or he could blow his opportunity. " I think pregnant women are beautiful and even sexy."
"Really? Then go ahead and feel! I think you'll like this. " she said seductively.
John slowly placed his hands on her massive belly and rubbed carressing her big belly button. John was too close to busting early. She quietly moaned and grabbed her breasts kneeding them like dough. Katie couldnt take it anymore.
Katie grabbed john and started aggresively making out. His hands still on her belly, she reached down to unzip his pants and rip them off along with his underwear. She drooled and lifted her legs over his. Because she couldnt fit her belly between them two she switched to reverse cow girl. Katie grabbed his throbbing cock slowly sliding it into her vagina, without even bothering to pull off her thong. She just ripped a hole in it! John wrapped his fingers around her belly and boobs and watched her fat juicy ass pound up and down on his long cock. Katie looked down and saw her boobs almost flop straight out of her bra as they were bouncing up and down. Her tail was going wild so he took it to Keep it from hitting his face and grabbed her hair. She was moaning and slightly drooling struggling to keep her tongue from hanging out of her mouth. He could see how big her belly was just by looking from the back. It was huge and a dream come true. Sweat was rolling down her body as it made her boobs ass and belly shine like lube was rubbed on it. Finally they both cummed making an explosion inside her that made her drool and john yell. They both cuddled and quickly fell asleep on the couch.

The next morning katie woke up to john missing. Checking her phone to see a text that said, " last night was amazing, but i have to go into work." She frowned at the text. What was she supposed to do? She needed to figure out a way to get back to normal. She noticed her belly slightly grew even more. She looked as if she was carrying huge overdue quadruplets. Katie decided to investigate the barn once more. Maybe there was something in there to help with her situation. She waddled to change into a tank top that couldnt reach past her belly button and tried to put on her booty shorts, but her tail was way too scrunched. Cutting a hole in to slide her tail through worked like a charm. It was very tight around her ass. You could see the top of her crack showing above the back of the shorts. Katie didn't care. She wasn't going anywhere today anyways.

Slowly waddling and never getting used to her hooves, katie made her way to the barn. Hopefully the minotaurs were still asleep. Something in the back of her head wanted them to be awake. The barn door slowly creeked open making very little noise and she shuffled sidewase to the inside. Luckily the minotaurs were in fact asleep. She still had a weird but longing feeling in the pit of her belly. The babies were even kicking. She stared at them for a second and then snapped out of it. Any clue or piece of information about the drug she took would be essential. Katie scanned the barn quickly stopping her eyes on a box that she got her pills from. The only problem was...they were in the minotaur pen 10 feet Between 2 minotaurs.

Katie was shaking as she sneaked into the pen. She had a hard time not slaming her hooves on the hardwood floor, but she managed. The minotaurs had a soft snore that made katie feel uneasy at the same time she could feel herself getting wet. Finally she made it to the box. She began to pry open the box, when there was a loud RING! RING! RING! John was calling her.

Quickly katie ended the call and shut off her phone, but it was too late. Both the minotaurs woke up snarling. She saw their huge cocks ready to pound her into next week. She tried to waddle fast to the gate, but the massive belly load was weighing her down and the hooves made it worse. One minotaur grabbed her by the thighs and dragged her to her knees. Her belly slightly weighed her down even more as it was so big that it touched the ground. It began to talk. " You need a collar and leash so you dont go running." She couldnt believe what was happening. The other minotaur grabbed a leash and collar with a bell hanging on it, and strapped it around her neck. She squirmed and flailed like a trapped animal. She moaned and screamed, but no one could hear her. Katie looked back in horror as the huge beast literally ripped her clothes off. It grabbed her with one hand by the tail and the other hand pulled on her leash.. He slowly rubbed his huge dick on her fat plumpy ass and tried to push it in her vagina, but it was forced down, because of it not fitting. The minotaur slowly tried again, but this time he penetrated her asshole, slowly pushing it farther and farther in. It started mumbling words like "Yeah, you like that you cow, dont you?!" It slowly pulled out and in, out and in. With every thrust made katie more wet and sensative.

"Please stop! You might hurt the babies!" She took one hand to rub her belly. The minotaur got faster and faster with its grunts. Katie's mind was screaming no but the animal side of her wanted it. Her animal instincts were kicking in and she couldnt control it. Katie's screams for help turned into moans of pleasure with every pump into her ass. She looked back at the minotaur and lost control of her tongue as it hung down her fat lips, and she was drooling like crazy. Katie was a human pregnant cow in heat and she loved every moment of it. She was soaked in sweat as it ran all over her swollen breasts, massive belly, and round juicy ass.

Finally the other minotaur had enough of watching and surprise grabbed her head and shoved his huge cock straight down her throat. The two minotaurs double teamed katie so hard her eyes rolled to the back of her head. She gargled the cock as she repeatedly had her asshole pounded with a huge shaft almost hoisting her off the ground. It was almost impressive considering how much she weighed. They thrusted faster and faster, finally finishing. Her belly began to expand slightly filling her belly with semen. She passed out on the floor with one thought in her mind. This was her life now, and there is no going back.
Liked by goblinm (Jun 27, 2016), david100 (Jun 24, 2016), falloutghoul (Jun 24, 2016)
Blank97
Well this was quite interesting and super hot. Also if there is no continuation nice cliffhanger.
david100
I really hope we will see a part 2, great work!
Billybob69
Thanks for the feedback guys! Originally, I didn't plan on making a part 2, and I kind of rushed the ending. Since you guys want more and the fact that there was barely any closure in the end, I will make a part 2 eventually. I work 6 days a week so it will probably take some time before i do so.
goblinm
I love this story, please continue it!

I do wish the story would develop more slowly. Let Katie develop over a longer period, but this is a great start in what will surely be an epic story.
Liked by throwaway322 (Mar 20, 2019)
Huntsman
I once had a lengthy conversation with someone who had worked for a publishing company. The most significant piece of advice that he gave me was that there is room for a rewrite.

Your story has potential, but there is a lot of rewriting to be done. I could write an essay on how you could improve this, but if I had the time and stamina for it I could write a new chapter on some long-overdue story.

Description is the key. The more detail that you can put into describing or explaining anything will make the story better. For example, HOW does her ADHD medication help, and more importantly, WHY is it in her possession in the barn? That it needed to get lost amongst the other medication so that she takes the wrong pill makes sense, but what circumstances make it possible? Also, what happens to her if she misses a dose, consuming a fertility pill instead?
Also, spread your descriptions out. Instead of listing details like they came off a bullet-point list, fit them in over a number of sentences. "She looked up at him with her blue eyes." "She flicked her shoulder-length brown hair behind her with a hint of annoyance. It was always getting in her face. Maybe it was time to cut it short."

Remember that any name starts with a capital letter. Katie. Skittles. Mister Snuffalupagus.

How you arrange a paragraph can make a huge difference. For example :

He saw right through her.
"Oh really? I think you are just trying to get out of it."
He raised his hands in a gesture of surrender.
"Okay, I get it. Not the place you like to be. Here's a better plan - want to hang out? Like just me and you?"

Formatting is also important. Should you start a new paragraph here? What impact would it have?

Finally, avoid skipping time mid-paragraph. If you need to skip ahead that is fine, but not without giving us the feel of time passing. Start a new paragraph, give us a hint that time has passed faster in that time, or even give us a basic description of what happened then, even if it is lacking in detail.

Katie woke up the next morning confused. Was that a nightmare?
She looked around. Clearly she was still inside the pen.
No it wasn't a dream.
Terrible thoughts swirled inside her mind, but she just wanted to forget this ever happened.
Staggering back to the house she felt strange. Her legs moved differently like everything between them had been pushed to its limits, leaving her to waddle across the yard.
Stumbling into the house the made her way to the bathroom and all but fell into the shower.
As she ran the soap over her body in the shower she noticed that her boobs were bigger and heavier. She doubted that she could fit in E-sized bra any more.

Hopefully you can see what I mean. Please keep trying. Work keeps you busy and that is fine, but do not give up. Try again, and again if necessary.
I hope to great story at the end of this.
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Billybob69
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Hey guys thanks for the feedback. This story was written in like an hour and i didnt edit any of it so it was more of a rough draft. Im starting to work on a rewrite now with more thought, story structure, character development, etc. ill be using your ideas in it, but this is going to take some time.
trivialconquest
Huntsman gives great advice. Love the premise, but I'd say the biggest issue was the 'bullet-point list' approach in how you described things. Like I could imagine it being read off a spam, interspersed with vocally saying the word STOP. Other than that, there was a few inconsistencies here and there (H-cup is not smaller than DD, DD is equivalent to E, iirc), but I can see this being quite the story with a bit of work.
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