Hello Preggo fans! Pregnancy enthusiasts? Preggophiliacs? (I think there's a creme for that)

I am agentdabz, or you may know me as my writing.com username, agentdz (I haven't a clue as to why it's different). Together with the help of Notabot, who is a storyteller on here I believe and a little bit of help from Ghan at the start, we created a fun, exciting piece of erotica for you guys to enjoy.

For those tuning in, curious as to what I am talking about, check out the story here

Anyway with the story now over I thought I would hand it over to you guys for some feedback. I'll put some questions down below, feel free to answer them or to just tell us what you thought of it over all.

Hopefully this way in the future Notabot and I can each produce wicked stories for you guys by ourselves.

1. What did you enjoy most about the story?
2. Did you find anything confusing?
3. Who was your favourite characters in the story?
4. What would you have liked to have seen if we continued the story/ made a sequel?
5. Over all how would you rate PT out of 10 and why?

6. Any final thoughts, words or ideas?

I feel like I read something similar to this before on a different site. FYI I'm unable to read it, something about heavy server volume and visitors

(August 12, 2016, 10:28 am)domini I feel like I read something similar to this before on a different site. FYI I'm unable to read it, something about heavy server volume and visitors

Ah yeah, the problem about it being on an external site is playing by their rules. Basically you can make a free account, which lets you subscribe to all your favourite on going books. Our book is almost 180 chapters long.