Good morning, everyone. I'm writing a story with various themes but all focused on pregnancy. It will be a story that will have several pregnant women how principal character but in different conditions. I upload the first episode where it presents the first protagonist. I would like you to give me as much feedback as possible about what you think (I know I have bad grammar) and the things you would like to see happen. Thank you very much to all of you:
Three stories, three strangely pregnant women, are about to meet because of a strange explosion in a building, which will undoubtedly make everything stranger.
[align=justify]Chapter 1. Aneu.[/align]
[align=justify]In a restaurant in a big city, Aneu works, a young waitress, redhead, green eyes, big breasts and very pregnant who was undoubtedly the center of attention of the place.[/align]
[align=justify]- How old are you? - The restaurant couple asked the pregnant waitress - My belly is 4 months, she replied - I thought you would be 8 or 9 months already - Another of the customers said surprisingly - My baby is a little bigger than normal - Aneu said while she tried to get the uniform shirt to cover the lower part of her belly, although she had no success.[/align]
[align=justify]During the workday, almost all the conversations used to be similar to that one, Aneu began to annoy her that there were no other topics of conversation, she never liked that everyone looked at her and asked her about her pregnancy. Aneu was working in her 18 years to be able to pay for her whims but she never thought about what this could bring.[/align]
[align=justify]When closing the kitchen, Aneu had to help the cook clean the dishes, it was a difficult task to perform due to her breasts that had grown from a size A to a size DD during the pregnancy and that made the task of putting the arms. The large belly that protruded both from the front and from the sides, forced her to stretch her arms in an exaggerated and clumsy way to carry out her task.[/align]
[align=justify]- What, won't you say who the father is? - The cook said while cleaning dishes with Aneu. - I already told you that there is no father, that a spirit possessed me and left me like that - Ares replied with some anger. The cook shook his head and Aneu tried to continue explaining “A few months ago I started seeing spirits and they didn't leave until I helped them. A pregnant woman wanted me to give birth to her babies, so she owned me and I adopted her body, her sizes and her babies, another woman wanted the same and joined my body, so now I carry twins, however with this second there was something special. According to her, she was a demon and that's why he had such a big belly, a belly almost as big as mine, but ... ”. Before Aneu could finish the explanation, the light of the entire room went out.[/align]
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[align=justify]Aneu began to wake up with a voice in her head saying "It's here, get up now, it's here", she remembered very little of what happened beyond falling to the ground, and screaming in the distance. Her body was waking up every time she heard "It's here, get up now, it's here." Aneu tried to move her fingers and arms but it seemed that her body weighed much more than normal. Little by little, she opened her eyes and recovered her vision. - Who is coming? - She asked in an almost intelligible voice. - My father! - Answered an inner voice from her head. The young pregnant woman did not understand the origin of that voice or what her father was talking about until, little by little, she tied strings and with great speed and spontaneity, she got up and sat down. [/align]
[align=justify]As she raised her eyes, she regained her abilities and began to realize where she was. Apparently she was still in the kitchen, however he had changed, only the emergency lights were working, the walls were spent and some fall revealing the adjoining rooms, it took him time to realize that the entire room was covered by a span of black liquid in the that she was. "You father" thought the young redhead. A demon?[/align]
[align=justify]Aneu got up as quickly as her body allowed, her body seemed to be fine. With one hand under her belly and the other supporting her, she wanted to leave the kitchen. She reached the dining room, and under the emergency lights, the chaos of all those fallen tables and part of the collapsed ceiling, there was a girl standing moaning as if something was wrong. The young Aneu, approached the girl who was moaning to see what was happening to her. From a great distance he could see that something was not working, a kind of giant black worm was entering directly through the girl's skirt, inserting nonstop into her body. The worm was of such a size that every time it had to open its legs more to allow it to enter, it entered at a fairly fast speed, and as it entered, the girl's belly and her breasts grew larger and larger, her clothers start to broken. The girl had a wooden stick with which she was beating that creature so that it did not continue, but it was unsuccessful and once she fully entered it, she passed out with a belly and breasts much larger than Aneu's.[/align]
Aneu was totally paralyzed and could not move, she did not want to know if the girl had died or not. She simply wanted to escape from that place by marching in the direction of the exit, however, the roof rubble covered the door and he could not get out, so with a lot of effort he climbed the rubble to the first floor, which luckily was in the form of a ramp.
Three stories, three strangely pregnant women, are about to meet because of a strange explosion in a building, which will undoubtedly make everything stranger.
[align=justify]Chapter 1. Aneu.[/align]
[align=justify]In a restaurant in a big city, Aneu works, a young waitress, redhead, green eyes, big breasts and very pregnant who was undoubtedly the center of attention of the place.[/align]
[align=justify]- How old are you? - The restaurant couple asked the pregnant waitress - My belly is 4 months, she replied - I thought you would be 8 or 9 months already - Another of the customers said surprisingly - My baby is a little bigger than normal - Aneu said while she tried to get the uniform shirt to cover the lower part of her belly, although she had no success.[/align]
[align=justify]During the workday, almost all the conversations used to be similar to that one, Aneu began to annoy her that there were no other topics of conversation, she never liked that everyone looked at her and asked her about her pregnancy. Aneu was working in her 18 years to be able to pay for her whims but she never thought about what this could bring.[/align]
[align=justify]When closing the kitchen, Aneu had to help the cook clean the dishes, it was a difficult task to perform due to her breasts that had grown from a size A to a size DD during the pregnancy and that made the task of putting the arms. The large belly that protruded both from the front and from the sides, forced her to stretch her arms in an exaggerated and clumsy way to carry out her task.[/align]
[align=justify]- What, won't you say who the father is? - The cook said while cleaning dishes with Aneu. - I already told you that there is no father, that a spirit possessed me and left me like that - Ares replied with some anger. The cook shook his head and Aneu tried to continue explaining “A few months ago I started seeing spirits and they didn't leave until I helped them. A pregnant woman wanted me to give birth to her babies, so she owned me and I adopted her body, her sizes and her babies, another woman wanted the same and joined my body, so now I carry twins, however with this second there was something special. According to her, she was a demon and that's why he had such a big belly, a belly almost as big as mine, but ... ”. Before Aneu could finish the explanation, the light of the entire room went out.[/align]
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[align=justify]Aneu began to wake up with a voice in her head saying "It's here, get up now, it's here", she remembered very little of what happened beyond falling to the ground, and screaming in the distance. Her body was waking up every time she heard "It's here, get up now, it's here." Aneu tried to move her fingers and arms but it seemed that her body weighed much more than normal. Little by little, she opened her eyes and recovered her vision. - Who is coming? - She asked in an almost intelligible voice. - My father! - Answered an inner voice from her head. The young pregnant woman did not understand the origin of that voice or what her father was talking about until, little by little, she tied strings and with great speed and spontaneity, she got up and sat down. [/align]
[align=justify]As she raised her eyes, she regained her abilities and began to realize where she was. Apparently she was still in the kitchen, however he had changed, only the emergency lights were working, the walls were spent and some fall revealing the adjoining rooms, it took him time to realize that the entire room was covered by a span of black liquid in the that she was. "You father" thought the young redhead. A demon?[/align]
[align=justify]Aneu got up as quickly as her body allowed, her body seemed to be fine. With one hand under her belly and the other supporting her, she wanted to leave the kitchen. She reached the dining room, and under the emergency lights, the chaos of all those fallen tables and part of the collapsed ceiling, there was a girl standing moaning as if something was wrong. The young Aneu, approached the girl who was moaning to see what was happening to her. From a great distance he could see that something was not working, a kind of giant black worm was entering directly through the girl's skirt, inserting nonstop into her body. The worm was of such a size that every time it had to open its legs more to allow it to enter, it entered at a fairly fast speed, and as it entered, the girl's belly and her breasts grew larger and larger, her clothers start to broken. The girl had a wooden stick with which she was beating that creature so that it did not continue, but it was unsuccessful and once she fully entered it, she passed out with a belly and breasts much larger than Aneu's.[/align]
Aneu was totally paralyzed and could not move, she did not want to know if the girl had died or not. She simply wanted to escape from that place by marching in the direction of the exit, however, the roof rubble covered the door and he could not get out, so with a lot of effort he climbed the rubble to the first floor, which luckily was in the form of a ramp.
