Hi all:

I'm a former lurker that has been a part of this community for a very long time.  I've been inspired by some of my favorite writers (JB, AntonPhibs, BelliusMaximus, Xxxcecil) and have started writing some of my own stories. I've also worked with a talented 3D artist named Silent-Artist97 collaboratively on several projects (both already released and others still coming).

I would appreciate any feedback or insight into my stories. I've got the link to my DA gallery here: https://www.deviantart.com/gymbo/gallery/

I recently finished a four part story that I called "Curse of the Black Sands." I'm working now to complete the second part of "Mask of the Rose." And I have several other ideas in my queue.

Thanks!

Looking good , keep up your writing it’s pretty damn good!

Really good writing, definitely among the better writers on DeviantArt. I read Insignificant Data and found it really good).

Some of the sex scenes are a touch too wordy/superflous, which makes the details harder to capture (since it takes more reading to assemble the picture you’re trying to build for us). But they were already very good and it fit the style of writing.

And the belly didn’t feel like a major focus- not really describing how big it is, focusing on it or mentioning it that often.

But yeah, well written and a good read.

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it very much. I recently completed another story.

Agree with DarthMort's comments. Your writing style is technically very good, but more focus on the growing bellies would be my personal preference.

I liked Curse of the Black Sands, the fantasy theme was nice and very much reminded me of JB's work.

Mask of the Rose was OK, but as mentioned previously, the focus was more on the sex and less on the belly growth. However, it could spin off into many different stories focusing on the individual cases, so there would be plenty of opportunity to try lots of different themes. I personally would like to see more higher order multiple pregnancy.

Anyway, here's my 2 cents. Keep up to the good work!

DA

I like your work a lot - I can only second the feedback you've already been given about an increased focus on the growth and the size of the bump! Do you do commissions?

(January 27, 2019, 1:27 pm)Gymbo4Ever Hi all:

I'm a former lurker that has been a part of this community for a very long time.  I've been inspired by some of my favorite writers (JB, AntonPhibs, BelliusMaximus, Xxxcecil) and have started writing some of my own stories. I've also worked with a talented 3D artist named Silent-Artist97 collaboratively on several projects (both already released and others still coming).

I would appreciate any feedback or insight into my stories. I've got the link to my DA gallery here: https://www.deviantart.com/gymbo/gallery/

I recently finished a four part story that I called "Curse of the Black Sands." I'm working now to complete the second part of "Mask of the Rose." And I have several other ideas in my queue.

Thanks!

Hello Gymbo, for a few months now I have read your stories non-stop, they have seemed incredible to me, really that among everything I have been able to read on DeviantArt you are the best, I don't know what stories have but they catch you from the first Now, Felicia, Adie, Alexia, Hannah, Ginger, they are all incredibly beautiful thanks to the excellent description and personality that you give them in your writings, follow that path really that the future looks great for you, right now I am reading Pandora's Box and I am loving it, they have also helped me a lot since I speak Spanish and learning words and expressions in English does not hurt, thank you very much for everything, great work that you do and really and please, keep it up, believe me that you fill many people with happiness ... I hope and soon you will write more about Kalene, I love that character and I want to know more about her story
And in case someone lost comes across this post, I really highly recommend that you visit Gymbo's DeviantArt profile, from my heart I tell you that you are going to love it

Just found your stuff, did you ever finish Insignificant Data? The setup was so promising...

(May 10, 2021, 12:01 am)Johnpole Just found your stuff, did you ever finish Insignificant Data? The setup was so promising...

As such I think that Insignificant Data were only two parts in which they talk about Samara's pregnancy, these two parts are part of the extension of the universe that talks about Junel PG, which are 4 readings, about Madeline, Samara, Iris and Ivy

Thank you for the feedback and the questions. I did not write anything additional for Insignificant Data. I’ve been working more towards build and interconnecting my stories into one universe.