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New story, The Wrap
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Lina Clayton
Hi all, 

        I really hope you're all doing well. It's been a few months since I've posted. This whole pandemic has drained my creative energy and I, like many others are just trying to make it through with work, school, life struggles. I've got roughly 5 or 6 irons in the fire, but I just can't bring myself to finish! I told myself this month I would. I hope it's worth the gap, and look forward to your thoughts. Thanks for taking the time. 

The Wrap is about Kelsey, pregnant, newly unemployed and alone, finally receives an item she happily crowd-fund in the mail. A belly wrap which will conceal her large figure and return her body to it's former self. She gets a job offer, and quickly discovers the wrap isn't as robust as she had hoped.

Here's an excerpt! 

Then, his hands shifted up, feeling every inch of her side, then slid slowly inward, feeling her crotch and her stomach, over the black fabric that covered it. He paused there and held her as he pounded her. He seemed to like it there, his open palm against her navel feeling her flat stomach. 

Her eyes opened in terror, she couldn’t leave him there. She acted quickly, grabbing the hand and placing it on one of her breasts. He enjoyed this and immediately moved the other to join and had fun massaging her chest. Albeit under her shirt and bra, it still seemed to get him off, as he quickened the pace and began moaning out more. She bit her lip and winced, her nipples were still incredibly sore and sensitive. She was still very pregnant and her nipples made sure she never forgot. Kelsey felt her ass getting red and she reciprocated by making her own sounds as well, letting him know she was enjoying it every bit as he was.
She took her mind off the close call, she clenched her fists, trying not to cry out as he began to climax. He bucked furiously into her as she made slight whimpering sounds and he announced his arrival.

“Oh god! Oh god, I’m gonna, gonna.”

She thought fast. “Not in me, just not in m-”

It was too late. Kelsey forgot all about it as he shot his seed into her center. He let out an animalistic sound, stifling his own mouth now with his hand, his breath staggered. She shook her head, her mouth wide open as she let out a long mournful moan, still on cloud nine feeling him fill her insides.

Almost immediately, she felt trouble. As he held himself into her, experiencing orgasm, she was taken out of it by the returning intense pressure against her middle, wanting to expand. She could now tell she was stretching the band around her belly beyond its limits, she could barely breathe. Her hand went to her navel, trying to catch air, and as he finally pulled out she got it, gasping in half joy, half fear. She didn’t understand what was happening. She went back to relishing what had just happened, and while she secretly enjoyed it, she had to keep up appearances.

“Oh shit. Brian!” She said, pulling away as he flopped out of her. She turned, looking at him as she gained composure back. He wiped his face, his eyes wide still recovering. “Brian, what the fuck!” She scolded him, feeling herself and his cum dripping out of her.

“Shit, I’m so sorry, I didn’t think I would- I was so into it.” He looked pretty apologetic.

Kelsey rolled her eyes, grabbing a wad of toilet paper to clean herself. “You’re lucky I’m on the fucking pill. Do you do that all the time?”

“I’m sorry, it just- happened, I don’t know what got into me.”

“Into you?! Into me!” She tried her best at playing the part. She privately loved the feeling, she wanted more. She would let him dump into him ten times a day if she could. She jumped again, touching her crotch, still hot to the touch. She tossed the wad and pulled up her leggings. He did the same while profusely apologizing.

“I, I don’t know what to say. I feel terrible, I’m so sorry!”

  “Forget it, I’ll be fine. Just make sure no one sees us together when you leave.”


Read the rest here: The Wrap
Liked by chops79 (May 30, 2020), Natas1889 (May 27, 2020), OliviaCohen (May 27, 2020)
Natas1889
Hi Lina,

The Wrap is an absolutely terrific story. Really enjoyed it. I highly recommend it. I noticed that you updated the cover. I think it would help a bit if you could divide your stories into chapters. Keep up the great work. Eagerly looking forward to your next ebook.
Liked by Lina Clayton (May 29, 2020)
Lina Clayton
(May 28, 2020, 1:49 am)Natas1889 Hi Lina,

The Wrap is an absolutely terrific story.  Really enjoyed it.  I highly recommend it.  I noticed that you updated the cover.  I think it would help a bit if you could divide your stories into chapters.  Keep up the great work.  Eagerly looking forward to your next ebook.

Natas! Thank you so much for the feedback. It means so much to me especially now, I've had a rough go of getting this one out, motivation is at a low even though I've got the time now. I was thinking it might be a dud because I haven't been as voracious about this one as I have in the past. 
  
  I've got a few in the wings that need a lot of work that are much longer, so I'll be sure to add chapters. Why haven't I thought of adding them?! Silly. How do you feel it was length-wise? I'm always self conscious that they may be too short/too long. 
  
  I'm also on the hunt for better cover designs. My shoddy Photoshop skills don't align with what I want. I'm thinking more of a DeviantArt type artist. I know that sounds vague, but I love the look of great hand-drawn art. 

You're the best!  Smile
- LC
Natas1889
Hi Lina,

I'm would recommend look at the works of Ynitsed Sivarg and Fiona Thompson, both still available on Amazon, in order to get an idea regarding what would be a good length. Phoenix Rose would be another one. There are a few writers on Smashwords that I also follow and the typical length for them would probably be about 7-9 single spaced typed pages. For many of those 3/4 of the story is the set up and screwing. The pregnancy and birth is barely the remaining quarter. An exceptional writer on Smashwords would be Lorraine Pearl.

I hope you return to a few of your earlier works which have the promise of being multivolume, like Roommates, Au Pair and Mail Order Pregnancies. If you have any other questions just drop me a line.

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