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Lina Clayton
Hey everyone! Just finished a new short. Here's an excerpt from the conception piece. GRAB IT HERE: STAYING LATE

Haley refuses to go on maternity leave. One day she reluctantly takes on a project due the next day and stays late into the night, alone in the office.

As they too, fell to the ground she was pleasantly surprised. The beginnings of a hard on were in motion. She stroked it a bit as steam filled the room. It was a large walk-in shower that would easily accommodate the two of them. She thought about sucking him off, return the favor. But she couldn’t handle it anymore and beckoned him into the shower. She stepped in first, acclimating to the temperature of the hot water shooting out from the versatile and quite fancy shower head. It might as well have been made of gold, it felt perfect. He stepped in after her, getting his hair wet and doing the same in getting himself comfortable under the running shower head. He took a deep breath and put his hand on her body. He turned her around and gently bent his knees, guiding himself into her. She let out a surprised yelp at first, feeling him inside her, but go comfortable. The first entrance was always a surprise. Her body seemingly never used to it.


           Her hands against the tile, the water on her back and her perky breasts, water dripping off her nipples. He shoved himself into her and it was like nothing she’d ever felt before. He grabbed her around the hips and slowly shifted in and out of her until she was wet enough to allow for a more rhythmic cadence. Her hair was soaking wet. She began moaning out as no one was around. She wasn’t normally a vocal girl but she left all her inhibitions at the door of his suite that night. He barely made a noise in comparison. She nearly reached an orgasm when there was a knock at the door. “Who the hell is that?!” She turned as much as she could to ask. “Ignore it.” He kept going at her, she began to forget it until there was yet another knock. “Are you expecting someone?” “Ignore it, we’re not home.” She laughed out a bit at this and moaned some more as her reached over to grab her chest as he fucked her from behind. He alternated between playing with her tits sending her into a frenzy, and placing his palm against her stomach. It’s as if he knew.

     He began making his own sounds, going quicker now, he was close. “Oh fuck me.” He moaned out. “Oh I’m gonna, I’m gonna…” Before she could finish, he held her tight and let out a massive sigh. “Oh GOD!” She stood up a bit, a hand still on the shower wall as she bucked and shook in orgasm herself. She felt his hot seed shoot into her like a fire hose. She shook in orgasm, but could only enjoy it so much as she didn’t want to collapse standing there in the shower, her knees buckled. She kept still while he finished, then he pulled out. She felt her underside, she was dripping profusely. “Oh jesus. That felt…amazing.” She was still catching her breath, looking up smiling, he was smiling back. “Another drink?” She nodded and they stepped out. She had spent the night with him, but they hadn’t fucked again in bed, they both passed out after their last drink.

                          When she woke the next morning, she slipped out before he woke up and met up with the others for a late breakfast. She told them variations of her encounter and left it at that. She was positive this foreign stranger was in fact, the father. A few months later she experienced the typical signs, which she’d never felt before, but she knew them all too well from coworkers and friends constantly telling their tales over and over throughout the years. One friend which she helped get an abortion with. She bought a few tests one night and sure enough, she was pregnant. She did the math, she had been unknowingly pregnant for a little over three months. How the hell did she find out so late? She had ignored the signs early on. She figured she’d have to have it now. She wasn’t terribly angry or disappointed about it. She wasn’t terribly close to her family, her friends would inevitably understand. Haley was pregnant, joining the club. She welcomed it...

Read more here: STAYING LATE

Thanks for reading!!!
Natas1889
This is probably the best work of yours yet. I really enjoyed it I also liked Beat, but I usually enjoy reading about the birth of multiples.
BumpHunter
The story doesnt seem to be on sale.
Lina Clayton
(October 17, 2019, 12:31 am)Natas1889 This is probably the best work of yours yet.  I really enjoyed it  I also liked Beat, but I usually enjoy reading about the birth of multiples.

Thanks Natas! I really appreciate the feedback! That makes me happy. Let me know what else you'd like to see.
Natas1889
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You could do something in the science fiction sort of vein. Undoubtedly, two or more women giving birth simultaneously is something to explore.  Definitely work on your dialogue, meaning how it is written out.  Also I should make it clear that I've been buying your short stories since you mentioned them a few weeks ago.  I've seen noticeable improvement in your style.
Lina Clayton
Thank you so much for the feedback! That's good to know about the dialogue as well. Do you mean how it's kid of buried in the writing, or how characters communicate as a whole? Thanks!
Natas1889
(October 18, 2019, 3:36 pm)Lina Clayton Thank you so much for the feedback! That's good to know about the dialogue as well. Do you mean how it's kid of buried in the writing, or how characters communicate as a whole? Thanks!

How its buried in the writing.  When it is like that it is difficult to follow who's talking to who. 

I could float you some ideas if you want.  Imagine your pregnant also has a few that are suggested by regular readers.  Private message me and you can have them.

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