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Mommy, where do babies come from?
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deux_anges
Fantastic. Thanks for writing this. Bring on the epilogue! Smile

DA
Liked by Mesarocket (May 6, 2021)
Hunn2020
Epilogue would be great!!
Liked by Mesarocket (May 6, 2021)
pokemun
Absolutely incredible! Really excited for the epilogue!

If you're not tired of this story wouldn't mind it extending to include Katie's second miracle and have some of her sister vessels.
Liked by Mesarocket (May 6, 2021), Hunn2020 (May 6, 2021)
awakenedhero
Excellent story!
Liked by Mesarocket (May 6, 2021), Hunn2020 (May 6, 2021)
Mesarocket
Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for reading my story Smile I've loved hearing all of the feedback and I'm glad this sordid little tale stoked your imagination. I owe this website something after not posting for 8 years...

There are a lot of great authors in this kink and I'm really proud of creating one of the top viewed stories on this website, which I consider to be the finest pregnant fetish site around. 

I know there's definitely room for improvement in my writing (I probably wrote half of this while drunk on my cell phone), so I would welcome any constructive criticism. Especially from any ladies out there. I feel kinda bad at all the fucked up shit that surfaced, and the story really took a dark turn with Chambers! But I don't know, it turned me on... I'll do my best to make the epilogue worthwhile, and I have a number of other story ideas. It just takes too damn long to write sometimes!

Anyway, thanks once again for reading and participating in the conversation. It really motivated me to keep writing!
Liked by awakenedhero (May 11, 2021), pokemun (May 7, 2021), bellylover48 (May 7, 2021), jokerpaso (May 7, 2021), Hunn2020 (May 6, 2021)
Hunn2020
Hey mesarocket, glad to read a great pregnancy story, and chambers did get kinda dark. But it was a good read. Looking forward to the epilogue
Liked by Mesarocket (May 6, 2021)
pokemun
You definitely have really interesting ideas! The belly expansion in your last story was really interesting and the religious/unaware slant in this story was also a thrill to read.

Definitely looking forward to more of your stuff, I feel like you have already improved a lot from just these two stories.

If I were to offer any constructive criticism it would be to plan out the full storyline further ahead, it seems like you changed your mind back and forth a little bit on this one. You wrapped up the Evan loose end but in the previous chapter it looked like you were planning a different role for him. It might have been better to get rid of him earlier to focus more on chambers and his forming a church aspect.

Absolutely loved the story though!
Liked by jin1976 (May 7, 2021), bellylover48 (May 7, 2021)
Hunn2020
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Maybe chambers promptly knocks Katie up again after she heals from her birth, and given her unique body, she can continue to breed and birth large babies. maybe due a family history on her mother or father's side? He decides to marry his first disciple and she walks down the aisle greatly swollen with chambers next baby Or babies as she seems prone to multiples? Or he recruits some more Katie's friends from her and mother’s former church and finds those girls to be just as naivé about their lack of sex ed due to their strict religious upbringings. And he promptly breeds them too while he watches his church congregation and his young female parishioners’ bellies grow and swell too.
Liked by amrty01 (Jun 5, 2021), Thebige (May 11, 2021)
trmbnlvr
Great storie
Hunn2020
Hey mesarocket, how’s it going? I’m still pumped for the finale / epilogue.

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