Hi, I would like to submit a story about young pregnant blonde, her sexual desires and passions before the birth of her first baby.

Smashwords:https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/707085


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I've purchased and downloaded a copy of this work. You really needed an editor to look things over. There a quite a few grammatical errors. In the first paragraph you have: "Especially in the last month, when got to sleep is almost failed because the baby is so often shove in her belly, and she had to catch sympathetic views of her colleagues at work."

If English is not your mother tongue than you should have had a native speaker proofread the work. It is a 'good show' if this is your first work, but probably worth more 99 cents rather than the $2.99 being asked for. I would recommend you looking at the Smashwords available works of Artemis Damodred and Janus Rain which are superior works to emulate.

I think it's an indicator of the quality one can expect of a book if even one of the tags on the selling page is spelled wrong... "lesbain sex" instead of "lesbian sex".

Thanks for your comments