Thanks so much for all the kind feedback! I'm working on a new story now, but in the meantime, if anyone's on Literotica, I put up the final draft of "Hannah" there!

I have been reading stories of pregnant erotica for a long time. I have even written a few myself. Your story was fantastic! I love the raw emotional turbulence... a complete roller-coaster. I especially liked the mysterious ringing phone they both decided to ignore. So many stories like this don't pay enough attention to the emotions that power the sex. Yours does. I've never been on Literotica, but I'll have to go there. I'd rate your story a 9/10, but only because I haven't seen the last part. Hannah repeatedly mentioned satisfying Alex' fetish. I suspect she has no idea of the scope of Alex' desires, and maybe her own. Thank you for the fine effort.

(September 15, 2020, 5:37 am)jfingers I have been reading stories of pregnant erotica for a long time. I have even written a few myself. Your story was fantastic! I love the raw emotional turbulence... a complete roller-coaster. I especially liked the mysterious ringing phone they both decided to ignore. So many stories like this don't pay enough attention to the emotions that power the sex. Yours does. I've never been on Literotica, but I'll have to go there. I'd rate your story a 9/10, but only because I haven't seen the last part. Hannah repeatedly mentioned satisfying Alex' fetish. I suspect she has no idea of the scope of Alex' desires, and maybe her own. Thank you for the fine effort.

 
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Just to be clear the version on Literotica doesn't have any extra parts or anything. It's just been edited a little.

(September 15, 2020, 10:33 am)Theofaron Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Just to be clear the version on Literotica doesn't have any extra parts or anything. It's just been edited a little.

I'm waiting to be confirmed on Literotica. Do you mean that Part 4 has not been posted yet? It's okay if it's not - no pressure. You have to write when you are inspired. I'm sure your edits will make a good read. How do I look up your stories? "Hannah" or "Theofaron"?

I posted all four chapters of the story here on Preggophilia; it's complete. The Literotica page was linked in my posting above, and you shouldn't need an account to read it: https://www.literotica.com/s/hannah-13

earning history is great to read and Hanna's description is awesome And especially her belly