I’ve been working on a story, and am interested in what you all think. I’d appreciate any constructive criticism or suggestions, third chapter is still a work in progress.
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Vanessa woke to the soft dawn light filtering through the curtains into the lavish bedroom. Through tired, half closed eyes she could barely see over the white, fluffy sheets bunched up around her. Closing her eyes again, he could clearly make out the sounds of leather brushing through belt loops and the shuffling of feet across the carpet as her... partner(?) got dressed for the work day. Truthfully, she still didn’t know what to call him. He was definitely not her boyfriend, and ‘partner’ implied a more traditional, loving relationship. ‘Lover’ was too casual, though lovemaking did occupy most of their free time spent together.
Their unconventional relationship began when Vanessa’s department was merged and she was introduced to him as her new director. She still remembers him striding into her office for the first time in pristine business formal, rolled sleeves exposing his forearms and her weakness at the same time. “Mr. Parks.” Vanessa greeted him as she rose from her desk. “Please, call me David.” He replied. His eyes met hers, his stern, but not unkind gaze framed by short greying hair and a five o’ clock shadow. “I look forward to working with your department, I’ve heard a lot about you in particular.” Vanessa suddenly felt an urge to prove herself, earn his praise. “Likewise” she replied.
Over the next few months their relationship developed rapidly, as they each developed a healthy respect for the other and strong professional rapport. Her only flaw was Vanessa was perhaps too eager to please, a weakness David noticed and gradually learned to exploit. He finally broke the ice one late night in her office, while confiding in her how stressed and ‘pent up’ work made him, he moved his hand from her arm to the top of her shoulder and gently moved her to a kneeling position. Watching him unbuckle and pull out his cock filled Vanessa with excitement and sent her extremities tingling. She didn’t realize how eager she was to please him, to relieve his stress and make him feel right again until she took it in her hands and felt her mouth salivate and a warmth grow between her legs. That was the first of many late nights, and she found herself living for the opportunities to make him moan and squirm, to take his dick down her throat and break down his reserved exterior until he would finally lose control and unload down her throat. Afterwards he would seamlessly return to his usual collected manner, and dole out a desperately craved word of approval to her as she kneeled gasping and drooling on the office floor.
One night, David changed his routine by bringing Vanessa into his own office and closing the door. “I’d like to speak with you first, before you get to work.” Vanessa’s heart was in her throat. Did she do something wrong? Or was she failing to meet his expectations? Or -worst of all- was he going to deprive her and end their nightly sessions? “Y-Yes sir?” David no longer corrected her when she called him sir, instead locking eyes with hers. “This… arrangement has been invaluable to me, but you have also gone above and beyond in your duties in this office and I believe our team has been performing far beyond expectations thanks to you. Your professionalism has not gone unnoticed, and since I’ve found our relationship so rewarding, I’d like to extend my gratitude, and offer you a reward in return.” Vanessa felt a rush of adrenaline at his praise, her fingertips began to tingle and her heart pounded. “Thank you, sir, but that’s really not-“ He held up his hand to cut her off. “As you are by no doubt familiar with by now, this job is extremely time consuming and demanding. While I love what I do, as I get older I worry about losing time. I’ve devoted so much to this company, and I can’t bear to give it up, but it’s time I started a family.” He paused to look her up and down, his gaze sending shivers down her spine. “This is where you come in. I trust you more than almost anyone else, and you’ve proven yourself a smart, capable business partner. I’d like to offer you a generous severance package to leave your position, and take up a new one as my homemaker.” Vanessa was shocked, and more than a little confused. “A- you want me to quit and become a maid? Your maid? With benefits?” David took a deep breath, and for the first time since Vanessa met him, she thought he looked nervous. “More than that. You will take care of the household, which includes cooking, cleaning, and helping to manage my affairs. But you will also be responsible for satisfying me sexually, and… bearing my children.”
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Vanessa woke to the soft dawn light filtering through the curtains into the lavish bedroom. Through tired, half closed eyes she could barely see over the white, fluffy sheets bunched up around her. Closing her eyes again, he could clearly make out the sounds of leather brushing through belt loops and the shuffling of feet across the carpet as her... partner(?) got dressed for the work day. Truthfully, she still didn’t know what to call him. He was definitely not her boyfriend, and ‘partner’ implied a more traditional, loving relationship. ‘Lover’ was too casual, though lovemaking did occupy most of their free time spent together.
Their unconventional relationship began when Vanessa’s department was merged and she was introduced to him as her new director. She still remembers him striding into her office for the first time in pristine business formal, rolled sleeves exposing his forearms and her weakness at the same time. “Mr. Parks.” Vanessa greeted him as she rose from her desk. “Please, call me David.” He replied. His eyes met hers, his stern, but not unkind gaze framed by short greying hair and a five o’ clock shadow. “I look forward to working with your department, I’ve heard a lot about you in particular.” Vanessa suddenly felt an urge to prove herself, earn his praise. “Likewise” she replied.
Over the next few months their relationship developed rapidly, as they each developed a healthy respect for the other and strong professional rapport. Her only flaw was Vanessa was perhaps too eager to please, a weakness David noticed and gradually learned to exploit. He finally broke the ice one late night in her office, while confiding in her how stressed and ‘pent up’ work made him, he moved his hand from her arm to the top of her shoulder and gently moved her to a kneeling position. Watching him unbuckle and pull out his cock filled Vanessa with excitement and sent her extremities tingling. She didn’t realize how eager she was to please him, to relieve his stress and make him feel right again until she took it in her hands and felt her mouth salivate and a warmth grow between her legs. That was the first of many late nights, and she found herself living for the opportunities to make him moan and squirm, to take his dick down her throat and break down his reserved exterior until he would finally lose control and unload down her throat. Afterwards he would seamlessly return to his usual collected manner, and dole out a desperately craved word of approval to her as she kneeled gasping and drooling on the office floor.
One night, David changed his routine by bringing Vanessa into his own office and closing the door. “I’d like to speak with you first, before you get to work.” Vanessa’s heart was in her throat. Did she do something wrong? Or was she failing to meet his expectations? Or -worst of all- was he going to deprive her and end their nightly sessions? “Y-Yes sir?” David no longer corrected her when she called him sir, instead locking eyes with hers. “This… arrangement has been invaluable to me, but you have also gone above and beyond in your duties in this office and I believe our team has been performing far beyond expectations thanks to you. Your professionalism has not gone unnoticed, and since I’ve found our relationship so rewarding, I’d like to extend my gratitude, and offer you a reward in return.” Vanessa felt a rush of adrenaline at his praise, her fingertips began to tingle and her heart pounded. “Thank you, sir, but that’s really not-“ He held up his hand to cut her off. “As you are by no doubt familiar with by now, this job is extremely time consuming and demanding. While I love what I do, as I get older I worry about losing time. I’ve devoted so much to this company, and I can’t bear to give it up, but it’s time I started a family.” He paused to look her up and down, his gaze sending shivers down her spine. “This is where you come in. I trust you more than almost anyone else, and you’ve proven yourself a smart, capable business partner. I’d like to offer you a generous severance package to leave your position, and take up a new one as my homemaker.” Vanessa was shocked, and more than a little confused. “A- you want me to quit and become a maid? Your maid? With benefits?” David took a deep breath, and for the first time since Vanessa met him, she thought he looked nervous. “More than that. You will take care of the household, which includes cooking, cleaning, and helping to manage my affairs. But you will also be responsible for satisfying me sexually, and… bearing my children.”