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Commission: Maddie's Eventful Night
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notabot
Yep. Another one of these stories someone commissioned from me. An attractive girl finds herself inexplicably pregnant one night, but lucky for her, not for long.

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Maddie let out a long sigh as she closed the door to her house. Her parents were out of town and she had the whole place to herself. After just coming back from getting some ice cream, she was exhausted.



Maddie tossed her long, brown hair behind her back and made her way up to her room, preparing to undress. If you’d asked anyone at her school who the most attractive girl there was, they’d all say Maddie. She had silky, radiant skin, piercing eyes, and full, pink lips. But what attracted most people was her perfect hourglass figure. Maddie had enormous, soft breasts and an ass so plump, people behind her in class would gasp when she sat down.



Although she was beautiful, Maddie had never had sex and was a very shy, innocent girl. Despite her naivité, her incredible body was very well-known, not just at Maddie’s school, but around the world. Maddie wouldn’t know just how popular her looks were until tonight.



Just as Maddie was beginning to lift her spaghetti-strap top off, she heard a knock at the door. “Who could that be?” she wondered aloud as she walked to the door.



When Maddie opened the door, she was shocked by a bright green light. As she held up her arms to cover her eyes, Maddie felt a burning in her stomach. She winced and looked down to see a laser hitting her in the belly button. The pain grew and grew until Maddie could no longer tolerate it and felt her body go limp and her vision go black.



Maddie woke up on the floor by her front door, her head lolling back and forth as she continued to feel pain coming from her stomach. “Did I pass out? What's going on?” Maddie mumbled out loud as she tried to sit up. But as she tried to lean up, she felt a weight keeping her in place. Maddie’s vision was still blurry, but as the fog in her head settled, she realized what was happening and she screamed: it was her belly.



Before, to go with her perfect hips and bust, Maddie had a small, tight waist. Now, it looked like she had just swallowed a yoga ball. Her belly, still smooth and beautiful, jutted high above her, reaching past her large breasts by several feet. Her tank-top barely fit even halfway over her enormous stomach If anyone had just walked into the room, they’d think Maddie was pregnant with 12 babies and she was long overdue to deliver them. Maddie tried to turn her neck to see around the enormous mass in front of her and could see that her legs were spread far apart like she was preparing to give birth.



“But give birth to what?” Maddie said as she rested one hand against her belly. As soon as she touched her swollen stomach, she cried out in agony as she felt a flurry of movement inside. Her belly was so large, the amniotic fluid could be heard sloshing around inside her as the thing she was carrying kicked and squirmed. And Maddie could feel it getting bigger and bigger, swelling her stomach like she was a pregnant balloon, as it thrashed. Maybe it was because it was inside her most intimate place, but Maddie instantly sensed what the thing inside her was trying to communicate. It wanted to get out.



“What is going on?” Maddie hollered along with her wails of pain. Her tummy was getting tighter and tighter and every kick from the enormous baby inside her was intolerable. “How could I be pregnant? I’ve never even had sex! And even if I had, there’s no way I could get this big so fast! This is like something out of a science-fiction story...or a horror movie! What was in that laser beam? Aliens? A demon fetus? This has to be some kind of bad dream.”



But another big kick from inside her told Maddie that this was no dream. She groaned and rubbed all across her large stomach, feeling her smooth skin tightening more and more as the kicks inside her increased in strength. Maddie had always wondered what it would be like to be pregnant, but this went far beyond her expectations. Stroking her skin, Maddie traced the punches and flails from the...thing inside her womb. Even though she looked like she was prepared to birth a brood, as far as Maddie could tell, there was only one baby inside her belly. One very big baby.


The more her pregnant gut grew, the weaker her clothes' grip on her became. Maddie could hear tearing from between her legs as her hips got into position to give birth and her tank-top was going to be in tatters any second now. But when it looked like it was the end for her clothes, the growing in her belly stopped.


"At least things aren't getting any worse," Maddie pouted, trying to lift her hips even an inch as she pressed her hands against her belly. That may have been a bad idea, because as soon as her hands pressed into her tight pregnant flesh, the child inside her made one extremely powerful and violent series of flips and kicks.


Maddie moaned as she felt her lap get damp and assumed the thing she was carrying in her womb must have hit her in the bladder, making her wet herself. Then, the pain grew at a far greater rate and Maddie realized what had really happened: her water broke. What seemed like gallons of fluid spilled from inside her, soaking the floor and splattering the surrounding walls.



“I’m giving birth?” Maddie moaned as she felt her oversized baby start to move toward her hips. “But what am I giving birth to?”



The tightness she felt across her belly skin moved to her pelvis and birth canal. She groaned loudly, feeling incredible pain throughout her large gut and hips. It was unlike anything she had ever felt before, but her muscles were all contracting and her vagina was starting to burn. Maddie held her hands against her belly and tried to look up as best she could. Looking at her gigantic pregnant dome, Maddie could see it twitch and throb. There were impressions of hands and feet against her womb walls.



“A-at least they look like human limbs,” Maddie panted, her whole body drenched in sweat. “But how can I give birth to something this big? There’s no way it’ll fit through my birth canal!”



But she didn’t have much of a say in the matter. The thing inside her womb pressed its head into her lower body and Maddie screamed again, gripping her belly tightly. As she spread her legs wider to make room for the child inside her, Maddie heard her pants ripping even more, giving her a clear path to give birth. As soon as it began its movements, Maddie threw her head back and cried out in agony. The burning around her vagina and the pressure in her hips was unbearable. But still, she could at least feel some sort of progress inside her swollen stomach.



“It’s…it’s working!” she grunted as she felt something sliding through her body and down her birth canal. “I’m giving birth! I can’t believe this is really happening!” Maddie let out another animalistic roar of pain as her birthing progressed. "It's working, but wow does this hurt! It's like I'm giving birth to a boulder. A boulder that keeps kicking me in the intestine!"



Maddie felt herself crowning and moaned even louder, now at the most painful part of the delivery. She took in a few quick breaths, never practicing Lamaze or childbirth before, and grit her teeth as she made another push. And she pushed and pushed again, with no luck. Maddie was nearing the top of the cliff and needed a lot of energy now.

"Come on, you weird big baby," Maddie said, gripping her belly as tightly as she could. "Whoever or whatever you are, wherever you came from, it's time! Let's get you out of my belly! That's what you want too, isn't it? I'm going to make one big push, then you're going to come out of mama Maddie. One...two...three!" Maddie screamed as she thrust her hands into her pregnant gut and pushed as hard as she could. And sure enough, she felt the thing inside her move with her.

As the head came out, it pushed away her underwear, making a bulge in her lap, and past the tear in her pants. Soon, it was clear that she needed some kind of support to give birth and squeezed her hands against her colossal bare belly, trying to push it on her own to ease the thing inside her out. Maddie’s legs spread apart further as she felt the head come out and she stopped, panting and gasping for air.


"You're getting close, Maddie," she told herself, nodding and sucking a big breath before grabbing her belly again. Maddie leaned back and made one more big push as she felt the person inside her womb get further out. Amazingly, whoever it was inside Maddie's belly exited through her comparatively small birth canal and curled up on the foot of her bed.



Maddie collapsed back into her bed, far more worn out than she was when she first got home and prepared to go to bed. As Maddie panted, she looked past her deflating belly to see what she had just given birth to. “Oh my God!” she gasped.



“Hi, Maddie,” the other person said. To Maddie’s amazement, she had given birth to, essentially, herself. She was naked, wet, and had an umbilical cord sticking out of her navel, but otherwise she looked exactly like Maddie. “Thanks for giving birth to me.”



“Who, or what, are you?” Maddie asked, her large chest rising and falling with each breath.



“I’m a clone of you,” the other woman said. “Call me…Caddie.”



“A clone? Why did I get pregnant with my own clone?” Maddie said before remembering the laser that struck her before all this happened. “Wait a minute…”



“You remember,” Caddie giggled as she reached for a pair of scissors to cut her umbilical cord. “That was a way to start the process to have your body create a clone inside your tummy. And that was me!”



“But why?” Maddie said, rubbing her now-empty belly.



“A group of scientists were already working to create this cloning technology. Any woman can just create a copy of themselves that they grow and give birth to in less than an hour. For men, it’s a little more complicated, but they can fire a laser at a woman and make her give a birth to his clone,” Caddie said. “They were pretty sure they had it finished and just needed a test subject and that was you.”



“But why me?” Maddie asked, still confused and exhausted.



“Because you’re so gorgeous and everyone knows it,” Caddie laughed as she looked down at herself. Like Maddie, she had large, inviting breasts and a fantastic butt, along with a beautiful face and luxurious hair. “The scientists knew it and figured, if they were going to make a copy of anyone, they might as well copy someone attractive.”



“Interesting,” Maddie nodded. “And they implanted all this information in you?”



“Yep,” Caddie smiled, tapping her temple. “Other than that, there isn’t much I know. I don’t have your memories. However…”



“What?”



“I do share some things with you. Your personality, your interests, and your secret feelings,” Caddie grinned. “For example, I know you always wanted to be pregnant.”



Maddie blushed and crossed her arms. “I-I don’t know what you’re talking about.”



“No need to hide it. We have the same brain, remember?” Caddie smiled. She got up, still dripping with amniotic fluid, and brought out a small black suitcase. “They left a few other cloning lasers in case something went wrong and I needed to make more clones on my own, but with a few modifications, I could make the pregnancies last a lot longer than a few minutes.”



Maddie gulped. “So we’d have those big bellies for longer?”



“Much longer,” Caddie smiled. “And we’d give birth to another set of ourselves. Want to try?”



Maddie didn’t exactly like having to give birth without warning, but her clone was right: having a big pregnant belly was incredible and she wished she could savor it. “Do it,” Maddie smiled.



Caddie fired the lasers into both of their belly buttons. Unlike last time, it didn’t burn or hurt but actually felt soothing and a little ticklish. In no time, both girls looked like they were nine months pregnant with twins.



“That’s it?” Maddie pouted.



“They’ll grow,” Caddie smiled, grabbing a towel and cleaning her off some. Then, she pulled back Maddie’s bedsheets and tucked herself in, pulling Maddie close. “When we wake up, they’ll be huge!”



Maddie grinned and jumped into bed with her clone, their bellies touching. “You know, I always wanted a sister,” Maddie giggled. “I guess this is the next best thing.”



“I’d say it’s even better,” Caddie smiled as the two identical girls drifted off to sleep. In the morning, they could both barely fit on the bed together, their bellies were so big.



“W-wow,” Maddie said, touching her sides. “I’m huge. Even bigger than when you were inside me, Caddie.”



“Hmm,” Caddie said, stroking her belly in thought. “I may have not recalibrated that cloning laser quite right.”



“Caddie!” Maddie shrieked as she felt her colossal middle start to tighten up.



“Give me a break! I’m less than a day old!” Caddie said, grunting as she felt her water break too. “At least you’ve done this before.”



Not long after, Maddie and Caddie were crying out as they gave birth to two clones each, all of who were identical to Maddie. “I wanted a sister, but this is a little much,” Maddie said.



“Tried to make yourselves pregnant again and it didn’t quite work out?” one of the new clones said, picking up the laser. “I think I can fix it.”



“You sure?” Maddie asked, gulping nervously.



“Trust me,” the clone smiled and shot everyone with the laser again. “What’s the worst that could happen?”



KnightOfZero
This one is amazing
notabot
I got another commission by the same person for a story that's basically the same, so I'm including it in this thread. He wanted it to be called "Marisa's Nightmare."

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Marisa stretched out her arms and yawned as she got ready for bed. Anyone could tell from looking at Marisa that she got a lot of beauty sleep. The 20 year old was as glamorous and striking as a model: long, shimmering brown hair; silky, tanned skin; deep brown bedroom eyes; succulent, soft come-hither lips.



And that was just Marisa’s visage. Her breasts were large and inviting, her butt was plump and ready for squeezing, and her 5’1’’ stature made her already large features even more alluring. One could also say that Marisa’s hips were wide and curvy, but currently, this fact was complicated by Marisa’s budding pregnancy.



To most people, Marisa was a quiet, polite girl but in truth, she was far from innocent. Marisa loved sex, and while she lost her virginity toward the end of her time in high school, she only got crazier once out of it. She decided not to go to college and was able to scrape by thanks to various part-time jobs and her parents’ generosity in letting her live at home.



Getting pregnant meant Marisa would have to bring in more income while also taking time off work sometime down the road, but thankfully a company, upon finding out Marisa was pregnant, paid her a large sum to participate in a clinical drug trial.



“You may be turning lots of guys off of me, but at least I’m making some money off of you,” Marisa sighed, putting her hands against her small belly. She was only a month or so along, but her small frame and her tight floral dress and yoga pants really made her pregnant stomach prominent tonight. She was so tired she slid into bed with her clothes still on, groaning a little as she felt her breasts wobble slightly. Marisa hadn’t bought any maternity clothes yet, but as she could tell from looking down at her half-naked body, she’d be needing a maternity bra soon.



Marisa closed her eyes and drifted off into an uneasy sleep. It was like a feverish rollercoaster, with lights zipping past her as her scenery whirred around. Marisa felt like she was flying through this horrific landscape while also being stuck in place. Every now and then, a laughing face would appear, none of them familiar at first. Then they started to make sense: the girls who picked on her for her early breast development in elementary school. The first boy she had sex with. Her mother and father. The man who got her pregnant. Doctors and nurses she only knew by reflex. And finally, stuck in the frame of her mind, was Marisa herself.



“You’ve been bad,” the other Marisa cackled. “You’ve been very, very bad. It’s time for me to come out and take a shot at being Marisa instead.” The other Marisa reached forward and touched the real Marisa in her stomach, pressing her hand in deeper and deeper.



Marisa felt a sensation like an icepick was being driven into her belly button. The pain was excruciating and she woke up with a loud cry. The bed was sopping wet with her sweat and Marisa started taking heavy breaths, her voluptuous chest rising and falling.



“It was just a dream,” Marisa panted, until she realized the pain was still there. She tried to sit up in bed, but she felt a great weight keeping her in place. Confused, Marisa threw her arm out and removed her bedsheet. And what she saw made her scream.



What was once little more than a potbelly was a colossal orb of tan, smooth, pregnant flesh. Her flowery dress now barely made it halfway across her belly, stopping right where her popped-out navel was. From the end of her breasts to the top of her belly, she easily measured five feet across and she was just as wide. It looked like Marisa had swallowed an entire pregnant woman on her own and it was curled up inside her, pushing her skin to its absolute limit. The exposed skin was radiant and tight without a single stretch mark. Even if Marisa could sit up, there was no way she could wrap her hands around her entire swollen middle. Marisa threw her hands against her belly and screamed, running her hands up and down to see that it’s real.



“I-I’m pregnant! Super pregnant!” she cried out, pressing her hands into her gut. “Ugh, it’s so tight. It hurts being this pregnant.”



To her horror, Marisa then felt a shift and kick inside her. There was something in her womb alright. And it was big. The kick made Marisa groan loudly, its force making the tightness of her belly all the more apparent. She tried to move her hands around to get a sense of the thing inside her, maybe even hoping to calm it down. What Marisa got instead was another strong kick, this one to her bladder.



“I can’t have a baby this big inside of me, if it can even be called a baby anymore,” Marisa growled as she clenched her teeth. “How the hell did this even happen? I was barely even showing a few minutes ago and now I’m as big as my bed! It would be weird enough if I woke up nine months pregnant with my baby but I look like I’ve been carrying octuplets for three years! Or more!”



The child inside her womb started to flail more and more, making Marisa’s belly shake and tremble. The gigantic swollen ball attached to her stomach and hips moved up and down, back and forth like there was a violent horse bucking around inside her womb. Marisa could only try out as she held her terrified hands against her stomach, feeling it jolt her around on her bed as gigantic bumps with the imprints of hands and feet flurried across her tummy. She could hear the amniotic fluid sloshing and sliding around inside her womb, which made her feel nauseous. Marisa gripped her belly more tightly, trying to ride out the excruciating pain of her extreme pregnancy.



“I don’t want to be this pregnant! I don’t want any of this!” Marisa hollered. “I want this thing out of me!”



Marisa should be careful what she wishes for. At that moment, she felt a strange twinge inside her belly. Then, she heard her yoga pants and underwear rip and liquid shot out of her vagina like an exploded fire hydrant. The surge of fluid soaked her bed, the floor, and splattered all over the opposite wall, making large puddles on the carpet below and making her thick thighs wet and lubricated.



The pain stopped for maybe a second, which Marisa savored as much as she could. But what followed made her rethink all of that. The thing inside her shifted, making large impressions on her otherwise blemish-free pregnant belly. The towering round mass quivered and Marisa could feel her massive child all too intimately: it was moving into her birth canal.



Marisa screamed as she squeezed her hands against her belly, trying to help it turn. Suddenly, the weight she felt shifted into her hips and lower back, making Marisa grunt at the change in pain. The burning and stretching in her birth canal only became worse as time passed and her legs instinctively spread.



“I-I can’t give birth to whatever this is!” Marisa whined, sweat still pouring down her face. “I’m only built to give birth to babies, not…whatever this thing is!”



Sure enough, as the monstrous child inside her belly moved into birthing position, it hit a point where it could no longer move. It was simply too big for Marisa to easily push out of her body. But it was already far along the journey, which meant even more intense pain for Marisa. The creature was taking up far more space in Marisa’s body than a human woman is supposed to experience and that meant a lot of her body had to be stretched and pushed to let it out. It felt as though her belly and abdominal muscles were being squeezed by a vice, her hipbones were being forcibly spread apart, and her vagina was being torched with a flamethrower. All simultaneously.



Marisa shoved her hands into her enormous belly and pushed with her muscles as best she could, screaming and clenching her teeth. Giving birth to this creature was not an appealing idea, but it was better than leaving it in this awful spot. Marisa could feel the child moving around as well, sometimes in the right direction, but there were plenty of kicks and squirms that made her cry out in additional pain.



“I’m going to get you out of me,” Marisa grunted, punctuating each word with a scream and a gasp. “I don’t want you squirming around inside my womb any longer. I’m going to give birth to you and end all of this.”



As Marisa said this, she wondered: did she really want to give birth to this…this thing? What exactly had been growing inside her belly and what would happen when she saw what it was?



The thought terrified Marisa but as far as she saw it, there was no other choice. Either push it this behemoth through her birth canal or lie there in tortuous agony for the rest of her life.



As Marisa pushed and squeezed, she began to feel some progress through the razor sharp pain. Every 10 minutes or so, it felt like the monstrous, mysterious child moved through her body about an inch. That little feeling of a giant, kicking body sliding down her birth canal a nearly imperceptible amount was all the motivation Marisa needed to bite down and focus on her birthing.



After three unbearable hours of labor, Marisa approached the worst pain of all: crowning. A new gush of liquid spilled out of her labia onto the wet mattress, this one much thicker and gooier than the initial water breaking. As its head made it to her vaginal lips, the pain in her hip bones jumped to an entirely new level. Marisa screamed her loudest, arching her back to annunciate her agony. It was so intense that Marisa stopped pushing for a while, but she knew that if she didn’t keep going, this pain would only stay the way it was.



So Marisa pressed her hands against her belly, pushing them in despite the tightness, and continued to force this child out of her body. Once again, 10 minutes of difficult, awful pushing translated to only one inch of movement, but once the head and shoulders slipped out, the entire fully-sized baby came out easily. Marisa moaned loudly when she felt feet of slippery, moving flesh leave her birth canal and fell back deeply into her bed. It was finally over.



But not quite. Marisa couldn’t help feeling the tickling sensation at the back of her head that she needed to know what had been growing inside her womb and what had just given her so many hours of torment. Slowly, Marisa sat up and moved, her belly still full of amniotic fluid and placenta. But finally, she got to a point where she could see the pulsing, breathing mass that she’d just birthed. And when Marisa saw what she had given birth to, she screamed.



“No…no, that’s not possible!” Marisa shrieked. “What is happening?”



Suddenly, Marisa jerked awake in her bed, feeling beads of sweat dripping down her neck and arms. Instinctively, she threw away her bedsheets and looked at her stomach. She was pregnant, sure enough, but nowhere near as pregnant as she’d just been. Marisa only had a cute little potbelly, just like she’d had before getting into bed.



Marisa ran her hand up and down her tummy, sighing and smiling. “I’ve never been so happy to see my belly,” she sighed. “That was the absolute worst nightmare I’ve ever had…that anyone’s ever had, I’ll bet.”



Chuckling to herself, Marisa grabbed her sheet and pulled it back over herself and closed her eyes, smiling as she settled herself back into sleep.



And then she felt like an icepick was being driven into her belly button.

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