@Theofaron Great story it was a nice change of pace, really built up the suspense. Realistic stories are always the best! I wish I could write like you but sadly I lack those skills, if I could add a suggestion, I just wish during the “sex” scene there was more emphasis on the belly, like Emily exposing her bare bump or something along the lines of a belly job. Overall 9/10 Can’t wait to read your future works!!!
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@Theofaron Please, please, please!!!! Continue writing you are talented in describing the attraction to the taut belly and this was a gem!
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