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Cocktail Hour
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jimbobjoe789
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@Theofaron Great story it was a nice change of pace, really built up the suspense. Realistic stories are always the best! I wish I could write like you but sadly I lack those skills, if I could add a suggestion, I just wish during the “sex” scene there was more emphasis on the belly, like Emily exposing her bare bump or something along the lines of a belly job. Overall 9/10 Can’t wait to read your future works!!!
Liked by Thebige (Oct 2, 2021), Theofaron (Sep 29, 2021)
dietcokedip1
@Theofaron Please, please, please!!!! Continue writing you are talented in describing the attraction to the taut belly and this was a gem!
Liked by xaikahn (Sep 29, 2021), Theofaron (Sep 29, 2021)
Theofaron
I published the final version of this story on Literotica if anybody's on there!
Liked by (Oct 5, 2021), (Oct 5, 2021), chops79 (Oct 4, 2021), dooditup (Oct 2, 2021), AnonymousBump (Oct 2, 2021), MLR44 (Oct 2, 2021)


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