Great chapter. But I went from chapter 3 to 6 am I missing some chapters

(November 7, 2021, 4:21 am)Markstan112 Great chapter. But I went from chapter 3 to 6 am I missing some chapters

Damn! You're right. Somehow my count got off and I missed a small chapter. I've updated my previous post to include the lost chapter (which is really more lead up to the finale) and fix the numbering issue.

Should have spent more time proofing. Apologies. 

Also, truth be told I'm not really into incest very much in general. I thought it would be an interesting vehicle for an unwanted pregnancy that couldn't be terminated, due to Rachel's religious convictions, plus it would boost the shame/disgust factor, which I guess is a turn on for me.

Thanks for reading!

It was a great read, although sad and the main premise is exaggerated. However, I applaud its realism, because from a psychological point of view things would ghapoen exactly like that: one drowns their life in alcohol, and the other gets tortured for the rest of the said "victim's" life.

wish i was Andy

I do not wish I was Andy. He got nothing out of the deal except of feel his untouched cock ejaculate while his angry, pregnant mother looked on.

This was a dark, dark story. There are many sources of dramatic tension available: desire/duty, fear/desire, fear/greed, and always the tension of the taboo...
In this case, it was disgust/desire, mother/son, and disgust won out and nobody came away fulfilled. This is, in fact, a painful but valid literary result.

(December 27, 2021, 4:33 am)jfingers I do not wish I was Andy. He got nothing out of the deal except of feel his untouched cock ejaculate while his angry, pregnant mother looked on.

This was a dark, dark story. There are many sources of dramatic tension available: desire/duty, fear/desire, fear/greed, and always the tension of the taboo...
In this case, it was disgust/desire, mother/son, and disgust won out and nobody came away fulfilled. This is, in fact, a painful but valid literary result.

Why did you read it then ?

This was dark, but well written. One inconsistency bothers me, though. If Rachel put a restraining order on Andy how did he get back in?

@Kuanyang It is my belief that Andy had been observing her for some time and noticed that she drank to the point of passing out at times. He probably watched and waited for the right moment, then broke in and took advantage of the situation. Or possibly he drugged her wine.

(January 7, 2022, 6:34 pm)Kuanyang This was dark, but well written.  One inconsistency bothers me, though.  If Rachel put a restraining order on Andy how did he get back in?

Presumably he broke in or something. It's a legal document, not a curse rendering him incapable of crossing the doorway.

I have to admit Im confused. So she got pregnant from some old semen on the toilet seat. Im sure itd have dried up by then but okay. Andy has a serious pregnant fetish and hes literally fighting this through her entire pregnancy. It seemed like he went from trying to do the right thing, even moving out after she caught him masturbating, to raping his mother? This went real dark real fast.