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thereddevil34
Hi Everyone,

I've been writing a story and wanted to share it with the community. It's my first one so I'm open to any feedback. 

https://www.deviantart.com/thereddevil34/gallery/all
johnyoid
Link is broken
thereddevil34
My bad. Try these: 

Prologue: http://fav.me/ddce1t6
20 Weeks: http://fav.me/ddce7ta
21 Weeks: http://fav.me/ddcew6h
22 Weeks: http://fav.me/ddcfrqm
23 Weeks: http://fav.me/ddchd4e
24 Weeks: http://fav.me/ddckbme
Liked by toto4u (Aug 24, 2019), OliviaCohen (Jul 26, 2019), JBowman_uk (Jul 26, 2019)
JBowman_uk
These are great! looking forward to more of them Smile
OliviaCohen
What he said, these are great...
sdsman
If you just go to the main page, you can get the gallery & all

https://www.deviantart.com/thereddevil34

The other links cause issues with my PC by not being secure
thereddevil34
25 weeks, part 1 is up on my page.
Liked by OliviaCohen (Jul 29, 2019)
bigboy23
These are aweeesome! I can’t wait to read more. Michael is a lucky guy!
insanelover88
Just finished reading all of these. Please continue writing these! I enjoyed these a lot!
thereddevil34
Thank you all. Part II is up on my page. 

Expect a bit of a time jump after this one.
Liked by OliviaCohen (Aug 2, 2019), bigboy23 (Aug 1, 2019)

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