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NikkiPreston (293)
December 29, 2013, 5:50 pm
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December 29, 2013, 5:50 pm by NikkiPreston (293)
This story is great! Probably one of the best Mpreg stories out there. Its all clean and is quite a long and well developed short story. Thanks for posting it!
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Minipreggo () December 29, 2013, 10:02 pm
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December 29, 2013, 10:02 pm by Minipreggo ()
Glad you enjoyed it. Shame theres not an ending on the story but what there is so far is really good
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Belly Button (459)
December 30, 2013, 4:17 pm
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December 30, 2013, 4:17 pm by Belly Button (459)
This is a very good story indeed and written in a simple, crisp way which really appeals to me. It’s a great read and I’m surprised it appears to have slipped under my ‘radar’ for over a year... A great find.
Chapters 2, 6, 9, 13 and 16 are excellent in my opinion, especially where the descriptive work is concerned. It’s a real shame there isn’t any more of this story done. I would have happily read this right through to the end.
Anyway, I’m glad this has come up. Mpreg was actually the route I was going to take ‘The Belly Bloater’ down (and did take it down in my own private drafts). However I decided almost at the last minute to attract the widest audience, to change the main character into a female instead and amend other minor bits to suit.
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Minipreggo () December 31, 2013, 10:51 pm
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December 31, 2013, 10:51 pm by Minipreggo ()
Yeah i really enjoyed reading 'the belly bloater' a while back. Was one of the first stories i read about pregnancy. It got me into the whole story side of things so thanks.
I had a quick read through again of it. I think it would have been quite interesting to see what you would have done for the character to be male
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domini (158)
January 1, 2014, 1:02 pm
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January 1, 2014, 1:02 pm by domini (158)
Anyone else have any stories similar to this? Its not bad