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Natural Instincts
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Minipreggo
Hi everyone, hope you all had a good xmas.

I found this story a few days ago and thought that it had to be shared with rest of you. Just to make things clear this is NOT my story

https://m.fictionpress.com/s/2817977/1/
NikkiPreston
This story is great! Probably one of the best Mpreg stories out there. Its all clean and is quite a long and well developed short story. Thanks for posting it!
Minipreggo
Glad you enjoyed it. Shame theres not an ending on the story but what there is so far is really good
Belly Button
This is a very good story indeed and written in a simple, crisp way which really appeals to me. It’s a great read and I’m surprised it appears to have slipped under my ‘radar’ for over a year... A great find.

Chapters 2, 6, 9, 13 and 16 are excellent in my opinion, especially where the descriptive work is concerned. It’s a real shame there isn’t any more of this story done. I would have happily read this right through to the end.

Anyway, I’m glad this has come up. Mpreg was actually the route I was going to take ‘The Belly Bloater’ down (and did take it down in my own private drafts). However I decided almost at the last minute to attract the widest audience, to change the main character into a female instead and amend other minor bits to suit.
Minipreggo
Yeah i really enjoyed reading 'the belly bloater' a while back. Was one of the first stories i read about pregnancy. It got me into the whole story side of things so thanks.

I had a quick read through again of it. I think it would have been quite interesting to see what you would have done for the character to be male
domini
Anyone else have any stories similar to this? Its not bad
Belly Button
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(December 31, 2013, 10:51 pm)Minipreggo Yeah i really enjoyed reading 'the belly bloater' a while back. Was one of the first stories i read about pregnancy. It got me into the whole story side of things so thanks.

I had a quick read through again of it. I think it would have been quite interesting to see what you would have done for the character to be male

Thanks for your kind words over ‘The Belly Bloater’. It’s much appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed it. It’s the positive feedback that does give me the desire and drive to produce more. I’ve been very happy with what feedback I’ve had over the three stories I’ve posted up here so far. I do actually have a fourth story on the cards, which is currently being written up in draft form (see comments following ‘A Holiday Romance’ for more information). It will act as a loose prequel to ‘The Belly Bloater’. I reckon it’ll be completed and posted up by early/mid February if all goes well.

Yes, an Mpreg version of ‘The Belly Bloater’ is something I did draft up. This ‘Natural Instincts’ story does have one big familiarity to it which really attracted me to it. It’s also written in a first person perspective - as I done with ‘The Belly Bloater’. It’s one of the ‘hangovers’ from the draft Mpreg version because the lead character, Jenna, was actually going to be me. Another ‘hangover’ from the draft is the absolute secrecy about the whole project and the remoteness of the location. It works perfectly well with a female character of course, but a male even more so. It would make even more sense. The truth be told, I done so much work on the closed hospital section that not only my heart was set on including it, I was also determined not to re-write several week’s worth of work! That’s just a bit more of an insight and background to that story if you or indeed anyone else is interested...!

If Mpreg is something which at least some of our fellow members here are interested in, I’ll certainly consider writing one for us all at some point in the future. I’ve got no problem with that at all. I do know it’s more of a ‘niche’ within our fetish, which is why I made ‘The Belly Bloater’ the way it was posted - simply to appeal and to be enjoyed by a wider audience.


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