I've been away from this site for several years now; I met someone that I thought was my match, but it turned out to not be the case. While we were together I of course spent my time dedicated to her, but in time I realized she took all my time and left me none for me. As you might gather from this post, I have ended it and decided to spend my time on me, and that includes writing. I've written a few stories in the past, including Michelle's Story which I am happy to say remains in the top five most viewed stories on this forum, and I'd like to hear if anyone has ideas for stories they would like to read. It's good to be back.

Nice!! waiting for some more stories...! or you can continue Michelle's story!

I just read through Michelle's Story, and I have to say, it is very well written. Only encountered a handful of odd, repetitive word choices but easily glided through those. Would love to see more work!

I'm glad you like my writing. I'm not sure I'll continue Michelle's Story, but never say never. I do have a rough idea for where to go with it eventually. I'm kind of feeling like starting something new, or continuing with Luna; considering the interest in big bellies on this site I think it would be well recieved. And where were the repetative word choices, pooky?

Sorry it will be difficult to locate unless I do a second pass. I do recall one sentence along the lines of making yourself at home, feels like home. As in, the word home was used twice which broke the flow of the sentence. I'll keep notes next time.

But again, your writing was very fluent, so out of the 15 chapters i only caught a handful of these instances.

If you do reread it, let me know, I did the editing myself so no one else caught those for me.